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Seafoam The Sea serpent

Post by Animalcrazy1410 on Sat Feb 06, 2010 11:59 pm

Name:Seafoam
Species:Sea Serpent
Age:15
Height: 50 feet
*Weight: 1Ton
Other notes about your appearance: long, slinky body, 4 legs AND 5 claws lovely light blue-green body
*Parents: He has no clue
Abilities:EXTREMELY FAST SWIMMER
Weapons: Claws, VERY sharp teeth
Powers:teleportation
Flaws: Lashes out at anyone he has not met yet, freaked out of EVERYTHING hes not used to
Role-play: I slunk out of the cave i was born in. I looked around cautiously, and darted into the depths of the ocean. I found three jellyfish, and snapped them up hungrily. A kraken suddenly darted past me, and i FLIPPED OUT. I slashed at it in a whirlwind of frightened teeth and claws, and swam as fast as i coud away.
*Personality: Nice
*Notes on your characters: Can be hyper


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Re: Seafoam The Sea serpent

Post by Magic Pi on Sun Feb 07, 2010 12:01 am

A little bit powerful.

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Re: Seafoam The Sea serpent

Post by Animalcrazy1410 on Sun Feb 07, 2010 12:23 am

Mystic wrote:A little bit powerful.
UUMM.. How??
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Re: Seafoam The Sea serpent

Post by Magic Pi on Sun Feb 07, 2010 12:25 am

His flaws don't make up for his powers and strength.

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Sabi Star the dip (demon dog)
Magic Bananas the baby phoenix
Herbert Ernest the elderly elf
Amber the phoenix

There was a young lady named Bright,
Whose speed was far faster than light.
She went out one day,
In a relative way,
And returned the previous night!
Whale + Toast = Cactus

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Do not annoy the writer. She will put you in a book and kill you.

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Re: Seafoam The Sea serpent

Post by Animalcrazy1410 on Sun Feb 07, 2010 12:26 am

Hes flipping out cuz hs scared to death
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Re: Seafoam The Sea serpent

Post by Magic Pi on Sun Feb 07, 2010 12:27 am

What?

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Magic Bananas the baby phoenix
Herbert Ernest the elderly elf
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Whose speed was far faster than light.
She went out one day,
In a relative way,
And returned the previous night!
Whale + Toast = Cactus

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Do not annoy the writer. She will put you in a book and kill you.

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Re: Seafoam The Sea serpent

Post by Animalcrazy1410 on Mon Feb 08, 2010 1:55 pm

The Kraken. When he sees the Kraken, he flips out, and that's cuz hes scared to death!! Evil or Very Mad
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Re: Seafoam The Sea serpent

Post by Magic Pi on Mon Feb 08, 2010 6:38 pm

Your character is still too powerful.

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Whose speed was far faster than light.
She went out one day,
In a relative way,
And returned the previous night!
Whale + Toast = Cactus

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Re: Seafoam The Sea serpent

Post by Animalcrazy1410 on Fri Feb 12, 2010 9:43 pm

HOW?!?
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Re: Seafoam The Sea serpent

Post by Magic Pi on Fri Feb 12, 2010 9:48 pm

His flaws don't add up to his size, strength, and powers.

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Magic Bananas the baby phoenix
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Whose speed was far faster than light.
She went out one day,
In a relative way,
And returned the previous night!
Whale + Toast = Cactus

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Re: Seafoam The Sea serpent

Post by Animalcrazy1410 on Sat Feb 13, 2010 12:07 am

But hes freaked out... even if hes powerful! how can that not match up?
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Re: Seafoam The Sea serpent

Post by Animalcrazy1410 on Fri Feb 26, 2010 7:41 pm

Happy now?
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Re: Seafoam The Sea serpent

Post by Magic Pi on Sat Feb 27, 2010 7:03 am

Lashing out is a minor flaw, but if you put the freaking out flaw back on, then I'll approve it.

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Sabi Star the dip (demon dog)
Magic Bananas the baby phoenix
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Whose speed was far faster than light.
She went out one day,
In a relative way,
And returned the previous night!
Whale + Toast = Cactus

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Re: Seafoam The Sea serpent

Post by The Wind God on Sat Feb 27, 2010 11:49 am

1 ton. Isn't that a lot?
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Post by Animalcrazy1410 on Sat Feb 27, 2010 11:52 am

Happy?
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Re: Seafoam The Sea serpent

Post by Magic Pi on Sun Feb 28, 2010 9:49 am

Did you just add the four legs and five claws or was that there before you edited it?

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Whose speed was far faster than light.
She went out one day,
In a relative way,
And returned the previous night!
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Re: Seafoam The Sea serpent

Post by Animalcrazy1410 on Mon Mar 01, 2010 9:02 pm

It was before I edited...
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Re: Seafoam The Sea serpent

Post by Magic Pi on Mon Mar 01, 2010 9:07 pm

I DEFINETLY will approve it if you take off the 1/10 of his adult length.

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Whose speed was far faster than light.
She went out one day,
In a relative way,
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Re: Seafoam The Sea serpent

Post by Animalcrazy1410 on Wed Mar 03, 2010 7:53 pm

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Re: Seafoam The Sea serpent

Post by Magic Pi on Fri Mar 05, 2010 9:27 pm

Approved.

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Magic Bananas the baby phoenix
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Whose speed was far faster than light.
She went out one day,
In a relative way,
And returned the previous night!
Whale + Toast = Cactus

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