Broken Star the Griffin

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Broken Star the Griffin

Post by Tweety Bird on Sat Sep 17, 2011 7:07 am

Name: Broken Star
Species: Griffin
Age: 16
Height: 8'2
*Weight: 326 lbs
Other notes about your appearance: Her feathers make up the pattern of a star, and her fur is jet black
*Parents:
Abilities: She's able to fly rapidly
Weapons: Sharp teeth, claws
Powers: She can heal herself, and she can bend her aurora to make fire and electricity, but doing so will severely drain her energy.
Flaws: She can never trust anyone
Role-play: Broken Star flew through the sky, her feathers shining. She felt the cool crisp air as it buffeted her fur. She flew down by a lake to get a quick drink of water. The water was cold, clean, and clear.
*Personality:
*Notes on your characters: She doesn't like to fight, but she will if she has too.


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Re: Broken Star the Griffin

Post by Pandorica on Sat Sep 17, 2011 9:07 am

Hmm... has a few too many powers. Either have them drain her severely and have less of them/ more powerful ones, or just cut it down to just one. The rest is about good Wink

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Re: Broken Star the Griffin

Post by Tweety Bird on Sat Sep 17, 2011 9:29 am

Edited! :)

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Post by Pandorica on Sat Sep 17, 2011 9:38 am

Alright, as long as she doesn't use her power a lot and it doesn't cause lots of destruction/ all-around healing, It's good. Just don't control other characters.
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